Entry #3 The White Saver
Every morning I drink a iced coffee before I go to work or college. It helps give me energy when I need to function or do physical activities. But if you drink coffee like me, you know how much of a foul breath it gives you. It doesn't have to be coffee, it can be morning breath, or depending on what you eat or drink it's going to always stink up your breath. But luckily there's this thing to where I can pop it in my mouth and my breath will be saved.
Ever since that day, I made sure to keep one on me at all times because you never know when to need it. I call them white savers because they are usually white and they will save you from the embarrassment. Just like how it saved me from the fish breath and other times. I like them because they are very cheap, like 4 dollars or something for a pack. White savers are very sweet and will keep your mouth tasting like treats.
Good "setup" in this post to establish the context of your entry. You have a good start with using sensory details to describe this experience. Keep pushing yourself!
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